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Pain so powerful and vast,
The sky cries for ages past,
The ground meets the sky,
Causing Angels to fall and die.

Fire sent by powers above,
Remind us of forgotten love,
Waves rise up free and unbound,
Tearing asunder our earthen ground.

People cry to be set free,
From the earth’s insanity,
Hiding in the comfort of their lies,
They have made their own demise.

They take and never give,
Yet they still wish to live,
When touched by true light,
Mortals lose hope and sight.

They see the truth in the flood,
They will pay with life and blood,
Tis’ the way that time will bend,
To show existence to the end.
©2004-2010 ~ShadowchildofChaos
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This was thought up to best describe that way that my life is right now...

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:iconblackwinter17:
hey,
i like your gallery. your good, keep it up. :dance:

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The man who can but sketch his purpose beforehand in words is regarded as a wonder, and every artist and writer possesses that faculty. But gestation, fruition, the laborious rearing of the offspring, putting it to bed every night full fed with milk, embr
:iconshadowchildofchaos:
Thanks... I'm thinking about puting more up... Thanks for droping me a line...
:iconwolfwolfwolfwolfwolf:
("The sky cries for ages past"? That sounds like mine... *grumble* *grumble*....)
Still, it's pretty good! Keep it up with the rhyming poems with a steady beat!

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:iconshadowchildofchaos:
lol.... Don't worry... *Pat's head*... you inspired me... lol... *luff*:hug:
:iconsamuraiofgod:
yes most ahve taken a long time to think of........ oh and good job :hug:.... ummm..

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:lmao: Samurais RULE and so do gods... but they dont have brains :( GGOOOD MAAN!!!
:iconshadowchildofchaos:
lol... Didn't take that long to write... Just took a long time to accutally *write*.... Ya... get the poem to ryme was easy... Have it be about me was the hard part...
:iconsamuraiofgod:
oh ok i see....

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:lmao: Samurais RULE and so do gods... but they dont have brains :( GGOOOD MAAN!!!
:iconshadowchildofchaos:
No... NO you don't see.. You are blind.. Blind to all thats around you... Blind to all that is and will be you... lol... There is a meaning behind that but if you do't get it I'll tell you on Friday next week... lol....
:iconsamuraiofgod:
ok well then you shall..

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:lmao: Samurais RULE and so do gods... but they dont have brains :( GGOOOD MAAN!!!
:iconshadowchildofchaos:
lol.. I will.... lol...

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